Feedback

As always it is quite nerve racking waiting on feedback from your tutor on assignments. I was pleased that my tutor agreed my research was a bit stronger for this assignment but as always can be improved, thinking of other ways to research such as; practical research, conceptual thinking and supportive research.

It was also good to read that my tutor agreed that some of my photos showed the decisive moment but sometimes the compositional element of the images let them down for example the advertising pillar in one the shots and the dutch angle of another. This is something I will look at when I rework the assignment.

My tutor advised that I revisited the location in which I shot this assignment and explained that sometimes it is best to revisit four or five times to get a good sense and feel of the area this would help me to choose a more specific subject, rather than just ‘the highstreet’.

Finally, my tutor has asked me to add in my own definition of the ‘decisive moment’ into my assignment as part of my re – evaluation and analysis – again this is something I can add in and work on when I go back through to rework the assignment.